Precious Peony- Inspired to Write Chinese Poem

I'm inspired to write a Chinese poem on Peony after seeing it at Gardens by the Bay. Yeah I just wrote for fun and it's not exactly in the formal format. I plan to sketch and paint peony when I'm free. Lately I'm really busy with 3 courses. 

鲜艳牡丹绽花放

亮丽花朵笑盈盈

老老少少皆欢喜

开开心心赏牡丹